Friday, 22 February 2019

Crit

Feedback:

  • Love the colour scheme
  • Takeaway posters are really cool
  • Animations are a little rigid
  • Very contemporary and modern which is nice - typeface works really well
  • Fits well with the target audience
  • Some people might not know what the stickers symbols actually are so could you have a really small caption around the edge of the stickers as to what they actually are?
  • Good use of colour theory, not in your face but still stands out
  • Presented in an engaging and interesting way
  • Hashtags say though love instead of tough love
  • R u really trying cover try without overlapping text.
  • Calming effect could be communicated more effectively if the curved lines were animated left to right
  • Stop procrastinating image is fantastic
  • Good idea having the stickers around the university as little reminders 
  • Good shape proportions on the sticker
  • Why yellow?
  • Can you combine the breathing exercise diagrams with the text?
  • The symbols on the mirrors do not clearly communicate if you do not know their origin. If you just simply Puy breathe below or something this could help 
  • Like the colour scheme. 

the animations do have a ridgit feel over them but I have yet to figure out how to make them smoother will take that in to consideration when we continue the development. Though we just learned it so we will see. I had to do all of the work as my teammate did fuck all. 
we will add some instructions with the breathing gifs
the ide of the stickers is they are simple and clean as to make you focus on the things that make you calm down.

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